.*-+The Weekend+-*.
In the weekend I went to my aunties house for a sleep over. When we first got to her house we got ready to go to wellington pool. We went for a two hour swim every ten minutes an alarm goes off then the pool water starts moving and starts making waves.
It was a bit scary at first because I have never been to that pool before.
After that we had domino's me my sister and my auntie had our own boxes of pizza. While we where waiting for the pizza i was on my iPad because the pizza took a while.
After we had the pizza we went back to my aunties house and watched TV. While we where eating our pizza me and my sister really enjoyed the pizza. The next day We went to a cat cafe there where lots of cats in the cafe.
I liked one of the cats called inky, inky was a black cat she was shy she was scared at me at first but then she got used to me, Me and my sister had a hot chocolate. After the cat cafe we went back to
auntie house. We all hanged out we had lunch while watching TV after a few minutes my mum and dad was ready to pick us up. my dad my mum and auntie talked to each other for awhile then we went home.
And that's what i did in the weekend!!
Hi nikita, With the I make them capitals. And add more full stops.
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thanks Jeremiah that helped me!
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