The bush walk
One sunny morning there were a group of kids from a school going on a bush walk all of the kids were excited. Tim had black hair a red jacket. He weared a bright yellow and blue bag. Zoe had bright yellow hair. She had a pink jacket and a pink and yellow bag. Jim had brown and black hair. He had a blue jacket and a blue and white bag. And last but not least kade. he had blue glasses, black hair, blue and white jacket and blue and black bag. They walked. They saw lots of birds. Behind them there was an ape. He had his arms ready to hit them. Zoe looked behind her ‘Aaaaa’ she said. The ape nearly hit her on the leg but she dogged. Feww she said. The ape tried again. He hit zoe on the arm and the ape ran away. ‘Ow’ said zoe. ‘What are we going to do? Said Tim I know said Jim. he walked up to a bush with big leafs like bafiges. He picked one off and raped it around zoe and zoe said thank you. Your welcome said Tim. So they jumped onto the bus and then went back to school.
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